I love it, it is looking really great. But there is still a problem. When I show new people this logo, they do not see the finger... I explained this in a previous comment. Also I like the "MOD-B" particles better because they spray more violently and more naturally.
My sketch is not amazing at all, but it may help inspire you... I want you to find a way to make the "pa" symbol look more like a finger, and more beautiful, and still look like the letters "pa" ... you have a tough challenge ahead, but you are talented and I believe in you!
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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/357698/CloudShot/shot_3232012_125524_pm.png
My sketch is not amazing at all, but it may help inspire you... I want you to find a way to make the "pa" symbol look more like a finger, and more beautiful, and still look like the letters "pa" ... you have a tough challenge ahead, but you are talented and I believe in you!
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